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Some Starfox Krystal lineart! Have fun coloring this, just...

:bulletpurple: Please don't claim you drew the lines.
:bulletpurple: Please give me credit (preferably by a link-back).
:bulletpurple: Please don't erase, cut out or otherwise remove/disfigure my signature.


Thank you!

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:slow: I just realized I gave her two left feet. How is it that I do that even when I'm being careful about it?
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~Sagaxus Apr 28, 2009
I was going to offer some critique myself, but I think it's all been said by :iconblazbaros:, so I'll keep my fingers to myself.

I can tell this was drawn in Flash. I'm getting better at recognising the line style :)

Good work :)
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~chesney Apr 28, 2009
Oh, cool! I really want to get into illustrator. :/ I'm still using Flash 4, but that's because I HATE how Flash CS inks. I hate how any version beyond Flash 4 inks ^^;

Thank you. :D

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*Blazbaros Apr 27, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kinda. . .goofy looking around the arms.

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~chesney Apr 27, 2009
I suppose the arms are a bit off :nod:. When critiquing, however, there are some basic guidelines you should follow:

- Check if the artist wants it first
- Be polite
- Point out the positives as well as the negatives
- Offer specific points on what is wrong
- Offer ways to solve the perceived problems, don't just point them out.

Thank you for the input. :)

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*Blazbaros Apr 27, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I r no expert on anatomy, but I find that the arms on this one are a little. . .awkward looking. I'm not sure EXACTLY how to put it, same goes for the hands, they don't look like they are grasping her spear.

And now the good part XD Love the sitting pose, her legs are damn good (aside from the two left feet thingy, how the hell does that even happen? O.o) and she looks quite smexy :D

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~chesney Apr 27, 2009
:giggle: Thank you! I found the arms a bit bizarre, myself, when drawing it. They didn't look 100% correct, I didn't feel like getting out the mirror and observing. Maybe if/when I redo it, I will have the patience to do it more correctly. This was actually about a 2" x 2" sketch that I blew up and detailed, because I was practicing different poses. That might have to do with arms thing.

The hand, I didn't notice till after I'd finished it and merged all my layers. I think the technique I use in flash to smooth the lines made her palm concave D: It wasn't originally like that, I swear!
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I wish Flash smoothed things a little better. One more reason for me to get in the know with using Illustrator.
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That was a brilliant critique, by the way. :)
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*Blazbaros Apr 27, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're quite welcome :D
O.o B-b-b-brilliant? Does that mean I gets a cookie?! :iconawwwplz:

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~chesney Apr 27, 2009
Hmm.
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Very well. :cookie:

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*Blazbaros Apr 27, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
BONUS! Pain and suffering pays off :D

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*Blazbaros Apr 27, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^; Oh sorry!! My bad!

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